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The Grey Stones

Chapter 8
The thundering of clouds and absolute silence in the surroundings complemented the intense thought chain running in mind of Bilal. He had refused to stay with his family and was staying in a small motel. The every sip of alcohol he took while staring at his picture with parents taken at London eye tasted bitterer to him. He sensed to be a passenger in an aeroplane that is about to be crashed. These moments were similar to the moments when the passengers know that in no time the plane will hit the ocean, the moments of hanging between life and death. The knock on the door broke the chain of thoughts. He diverted his gaze away from the picture to the clock on the wall. It was nearly a midnight. The continuous knock sounded weird to him given the time and bad weather. He got up from the chair and walked to toilet for washing his face. The reflection of thick tears in mirror made him realise that he is been crying for last two hours.

He slowly walked and opened the door. He was surprised to see a man with nicely trimmed beard standing and staring in a very odd manner. The man was completely a stranger to Bilal. Bilal in a low tone asked “Do I know you?” The man replied “Yes! I was in the same situation of yours three years back.” This comment made Bilal to look directly in the eyes of man. The man reading the blankness on Bilal’s face continued “My name is Ahmed. I am here to help you out from this despair situation.” Bilal could not understand what he meant and signalled him to come inside. The thought that he has left the bottle of scotch on the floor and connotations of this act sparked across his mind. He at once turned back and before he could utter a word, Ahmed said in a soft tone “I also drink alcohol, do not be nervous.” Bilal for the first time looked more carefully to the man after this comment. He noticed couple of rings and a bracelet on his hand. He had short hairs and was wearing nicely ironed clothes. Ahmed broke the silence “Be comfortable, I am your friend.” Bilal starred in his eyes for a second and then nodded his head.

Bilal offered him a chair to sit. Ahmed made another shocking statement “made me a peg with water too.” The whole thought of pain and agony was overcome with the presence of a complete stranger in his room. He grabbed a glass and made a peg for him. Ahmed took a small sip and spoke while looking in the glass “I did MBA from Harvard Business School and was working at top management position at a multi-national in US. I came to Pakistan three years back when my father and brothers got killed while fighting in Afghanistan, my only sister was raped by frangis (foreigners) and my mother committed suicide after all this.” He took a deep breath and looked in eyes of Bilal. Bilal in a complete state of perplexity asked “Why you are telling all this to me?” Ahmed continued to stare in his eyes. It felt to Bilal that his passionate gaze is breaking through his soul. Ahmed closed his eyes for a second and spoke “We have been through the same situation. I have felt the same pain and helplessness you are facing. I can see an element of revenge in your eyes, the same aspect of revenge that I had three years back. This war is not against terrorism rather it is against us. The war is against our race. The western alliance is committing an ethnocide through wiping off our race from origin. The only way we can survive is to retaliate.” Bilal jumped off his chair after hearing the last words. He shouted “Get out! I cannot do that.” Ahmed held Bilal from his shoulders and spoke “No one else is suffering. We Pakhtuns are killed. What was the fault of your parents? They even did not live here but still were killed. This is the only way you can payoff to your parents that you fight to protect their future generations and if You are scared from fighting then stop crying and feeling pity as cowards have no right to feel misfortuned.” Ahmed left his shoulders and walked out of the room. Bilal stood still at his place completely bamboozled.

(To be continued)
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The Grey Stones

Chapter 7
Bilal opened his eyes to look through the paved mirror of an old vehicle finding range of mountains whose tops were covered by snow. The sight presented a glimpse of paradise man can imagine on earth. The beautiful sky, mighty mountains and freely floating eagles were not a source of calmness to his soggy eyes rather Bilal found all of this responsible for tragedy to his parents. He started to knock his fingers across gaps between seats with great unrest and looked at clock placed on the front mirror of Bus for figuring the time left for finding his soul burning through hell of pain. He stared at the clouds of smoke rising from driver’s window. He was shocked to figure out that driver was smoking hashish while driving. He eagerly asked next seat passenger “The driver of bus is smoking hashish openly.” A man with a long beard looked straight in his eyes and then laughed. Bilal felt that smile was about his state of great despair. That man replied “Maara ya to chalta hai.” The words ‘its fine’ knocked through all the artistic veils in Bilal’s head. He just lowered his head and started to wait till he can discover the last drops of a dreadful toxin.
The conductor of bus shouted “Jaranawala has arrived”. The words were like the heaviest axe has fallen across Bilal’s head tearing it in pieces. He walked out of bus and caught glimpse of his family breaking in tears after seeing him. His uncle ran to him and hugged him crying. Bilal did not move an inch and it seemed like that he is no more than an idol. Bilal was driven to the mosque where everyone was waiting for him to have a last look at his parents before the commencement of the prayers for burying his parents. He looked at closed eyes of his father and could feel lot of unanswered questions being hidden behind them. The prayers started and the words for calmness of their soul were making him feel that he is being thrown in front of ravenous dogs trying to get each and every inch of his body. The crowd lead the corpses in an Islamic fashion known as Janaja to graveyard.
Bilal found himself near to God first time in his life when he saw the darkness of deeply dig graves. The fear of grave for a moment overcame his inner emotional turmoil. After the ritual of burying, people stood around the grave to recite verses of Holly Quran for peace of their soul. The prayer was over and people were waiting for Bilal to stand from the graves. Bilal looked back at the crowd and then he put his head over the grave of his mother. After a moment he raised his head and took the wet sand of grave in his hand. He shouted “My parents were innocent. They are killed.” He put the sand on his hairs and looked to the crowd hollering “The society has to answer the killing of my parents. I will take the revenge. All of you are murderers.” His family was traumatized to see this reaction though there was a light smile on a face of a young looking shrewd guy in a corner of a crowd.

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The Grey Stones

Chapter 6
Bilal kissed on cheeks of Juan and said her good bye as they reached London. After coming back to home Bilal switched on TV and started to surf around channels as the memories of last night were still prevailing in his mind. These words on BBC news “American forces again attacked across border on soil of Pakistan” broke his chain of beautiful visionary memory in his head. He stared at news broadcaster who continued “American jet fighters bombarded a village named Jaranawala near the border killing forty people in a marriage.” The images of destruction and blood all over made Bilal petrified as his own parents has gone to the same village. Broadcaster continued “According to our sources it is believed that none of them were associated with any terrorist groups and were innocent civilians. The killed included seventeen women and nine children. As usual Pakistani government has condemned this attack without being much concerned about the victims.” These words were hammering in his mind and he took the phone with a fear hidden somewhere inside his heart. He called his uncle at Jaranawala to know about wellbeing of his parents.

“Hello uncle how are u” spoken by Bilal in a very low tone. Uncle recognizing voice of his nephew replied “Bilal where you been. We have been trying to call you for last twenty four hours.” Bilal spoke with a feel that his heart will almost jump outside “How are my parents.” His uncle broke in tears and hardly spoke “ They were killed in an American attack”. These words sounded like an explosion of atomic bomb around Bilal. He went in a state of absolute stillness and without listening further to his uncle the phone fell down from his hand. The continuous hello on phone was not able to grab his attention as the time around him has almost stopped and he was hanging around in a gap between life and death. After few moments he broke in tears.

When the tears in his eyes dried, he looked at clock. It has been three hours since he has been crying. He called Abassi and told him about this tragedy. Abassi and Juan came to Bilal’s house in a while and drove him off to the airport. There was a complete silence on the way. After reaching airport Abassi hugged Bilal and whispered “You have the strength to fight with this storm.” Juan was speechless as she walked with Bilal to travelling lounge. She held his hand and just looked in his eyes. There were tears in eyes of Juan. She said “take good care” and saw Bilal going in lounge to catch flight to Pakistan. The shinning of her eyes turned in dullness as Bilal disappeared from her eyes.





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The Grey Stones

Chapter 6
“I felt my soul floating across the words you sang yesterday” said by Juan while staring at the mounting waves dying as they reach near the shore. Bilal looked at her and said “These stars are staring at us and shining with contentment as they are feeling the passion in our hearts for love.” Juan stood up and started to gaze down from the cliff at the white sand getting wet by waves. Bilal asked her “what you are looking at.” Juan replied in a low tone while looking at the white sand “The particles of sand near ocean are so lucky as they get enriched with the warmth of ocean and feel condensation of zeal hidden in these mighty waves being absorbed in them.” Bilal closed his eyes and spoke hearing a weird sound made by sea “These particles of sand communicate with depth of ocean and intensity of land. They are the perfect bridge between two equally profound worlds. They are like creativity from bottom of heart for establishing a medium of communication between hate and love.”
Juan turned her head and looked at Bilal who had still closed his eyes lost in the world of conflicting thoughts. Bilal opened his eyes and took a deep breath. He took hand of Juan in his hand and said in an affable tone “A perfect picture is painted depicting depth of ocean, grandeur of sky, beauty of stars and intensity of these rocks for making me speak the thought emerging from centre of my heart. I feel that the spirit inside u makes me feel completed. The flowers of passion start to grow inside my heart when I look at the ocean of innocence behind your eyes. I have a very special feeling for you.” Juan said “I feel like being carried by angels to the heights of purity thus continue the flow of your expressions.” Bilal uttered softly


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The Grey Stones

Chapter 5
“Why do you think Whales is perfect place for composing our music” said by Juan to Abassi. Abassi kept on starting at herd of birds flying in air. He took his hand out of window of car and tried to resist fast blowing wind. The feeling of his hand thumped by breeze gave him a weird calmness. He looked at anxious eyes of Juan and replied with a smile “The beauty and calmness of place makes it ideal for us to explore our imagination.” Bilal spoke in a low tone “The Hills will be exciting.” Juan looked at him and passed her compassionate smile. After two hours they reached Whales.
They were staying in a small cottage located at a top of a hill. Bilal said “God has painted a perfect picture of beauty” while looking at surroundings from terrace of cottage. Juan replied “I want to fly between these hills kissing every beautiful flower.” Bilal hold her hand and looked in her eyes and said “Flowers are not beautiful then your innocence.” Abassi interestingly listened their conversation and then interrupted “This place is special to me as I found my love here and may be you guys also find your passion hidden in calmness of this breeze.” Juan closed her eyes and felt zephyr ticking her cheeks


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The Grey Stones

Chapter 4
“Bilal I wished you could have companied us to Pakistan for attending your cousin’s wedding” said by Walid father of Bilal. Walid migrated to UK decades back though all his relatives lived in his village back home. He is going to his village with his wife for attending his nephew’s marriage. He continued “I know that you have got your final semester exams. You not only need to concentrate on your studies but also have to manage yourself in absence of us.” Bilal replied “I will manage myself. Do not worry about me but Dad are you sure that its’ a right time to go Jaranawala?” Walid laughed looking at his son’s anxious eyes and said in affable tone “I know that Jaranawala is near border of Afghanistan and there is a war going on there but things in Pakistan are normal. Do not worry. We will take care of ourselves.” Bilal hugged his father. They put luggage in boot of care and drove towards Heathrow airport.
Bilal said to his father while driving “bring some cool pictures of Jaranwala and my cousins.” Walid put his hand on Bilal’s shoulder and said “It’s been a while that you been to Jaranwala. I will send you to meet your family in the summer vacations. You should know your culture and heritage.” Bilal laughed and said “I will go to Lahore or Karachi rather than staying in that small town.” Walid replied “I agree with you that Jaranwala is not a happening town but the significance of that place lies in its beauty. The valley is surrounded by mighty Himalayas cover with snow. That is a paradise on earth. There is no buzz of commercial world around and it’s a perfect spot for escaping lucrative atmosphere of this artificial world.” Bilal looked in his father’s eyes figuring love for his home town and said “Yeah I will go there soon


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The Grey Stones

Chapter 3
“We are still not able to find right voice to match our compositions” said by Juan while ending the composition. Abassi looked at her and said “I have found someone who is capable of contributing positively by widening our circle of creativity.” Juan put her guitar on the carpet and excitedly asked “Really!” Abassi nodded his head. Juan looking in eyes of Abassi asked “Who.” Abassi replied “He will come in a while then you can meet him.” Juan opened her beer and sat on sofa looking at the door anxiously.
There was a knock on the door. Abassi slowly walked and opened door. Bilal greeted Abbasi. Abassi could feel the depth of intellect in his shinning eyes. He asked him to come inside. Juan got surprised to catch a glimpse of the guy to whom her eyes have been following for a while now. Abassi said “Juan this is Bilal. He has a melodic voice and now he will work with us on our music


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The Grey Stones


Chapter 2
“I should talk to him” sparked across mind of Abassi while seeing a young man from his terrace staring at him. Bilal is around twenty two and is doing bachelors from London School of Economics. Bilal has been a very bright student throughout his studies as he is on scholarship in LSE. Bilal lives in the same street that of Abassi. He is been trying to talk with Abassi for few days now but never gained courage to have a conversation with a man who is tabooed among their community


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Chapter 1
He slowly walked to the windowpane and knocked on a quite an old glass. He took his spectacles off and tried to gawk through the fainted glass. The grey clouds on the sky initiated him to open the window. The sudden wave of the cold breeze inserted inside his body and shook his soul. He turned back and looked at people sitting on the chairs staring at him with weird expressions on their face. “You are wondering that why I left playing tone without ending it?” said by Saddiq Abassi. Abassi is around sixty years old. He was born in London and has never gone back to the country from where his parents migrated to UK. The most interesting fact about him is that he has the highest collection of drawings and portraits depicting the life, emotions and passion of Pakistan the country of his origin though he has never been there. All those who had the opportunity to have a look at his creation found them the real images which they feel or experience in the country whereas all this illustration is the result of his mere imagination. Abassi had a son who was killed in a dark night just two months after the London blasts. The British Police was not able to find the reason for the murder neither were able to track the assassins, Abassi inside his heart knew the reason and that was his son was a muslim but he never expressed any such thing. Abassi teaches piano at Greyfield school of music


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Anokhee jeet ( A unique victory)

Scene 6
Shah parked his car nearly a mile away from Manly beach. He came out of the car and started to walk slowly towards the mounting waves. He looked at sky trying to figure out a pattern in the stars. He felt a hushed rapport between the ocean and sky. He laughed thinking that ocean and sky are both ogling at each other for discerning their glory and magnificence. The white sand was sparkling gorgeously in the light of moon. He took off his shoes and walked on the sand feeling a weird calmness under his feet. He felt a bizarre comfort in kicking the sand castles left over by the people in day. He suddenly felt waves of water tickling over his lower legs. He stopped and looked down for the first time and realized that he has reached the sea.
Shah took the half piece of hundred dollar and put in under a stone on the sand. He looked around. There was no one except darkness and piercing silence. He stood there and interestingly saw that mighty waves flow from the ocean towards land creating a roar hits into big rocks and breaks in pieces. He felt that rocks stood speechless without any emotions. He uttered “These waves represent life and these rocks are symbols of death. The life full of emotions and passions strike with the death and ends up in passive silence. These rocks absorb few drops of water in them after the collision. These few drops are the moments of our lives that make our death meaningless and complete.”

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